I think you should have a stronger pose at the beginning that you hold. Hold it there so he can have a reaction/change of expression. maybe he's shocked a little. Have that be the beginning expression. Then, maybe a blink and his face changes to the frown. Then he moves forward and says the line. As for the lip sync, it's ok. you could really link the acting and dialogue together more by having him hit an accent. It sounds like the best place would be at "daughter." have him say "what have you done" in one pose. Then when he gets to "daughter" you can have his eyebrows and face cringe/crease and have his mouth open wider for that. also you could add some head movement at that part too. Have his head and shoulders come forward a little too.
I think you should have a stronger pose at the beginning that you hold. Hold it there so he can have a reaction/change of expression. maybe he's shocked a little. Have that be the beginning expression. Then, maybe a blink and his face changes to the frown. Then he moves forward and says the line. As for the lip sync, it's ok. you could really link the acting and dialogue together more by having him hit an accent. It sounds like the best place would be at "daughter." have him say "what have you done" in one pose. Then when he gets to "daughter" you can have his eyebrows and face cringe/crease and have his mouth open wider for that. also you could add some head movement at that part too. Have his head and shoulders come forward a little too.
ReplyDeletenice, thanks for the help!:)
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