Tuesday, January 8, 2013

COLORSCRIPT

The color script. Open to critiques, much appreciated. 

2 comments:

  1. The eighth color script is not reading. You can't tell the form of the witch. And I think that some of your scripts are losing form.

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  2. I agree. Also, the shot where the house is revealed should have some hotter highlights on the house. You could have it stand out much more. Also, when the witch appears, why don't you introduce another color, another light? Maybe a red or something to indicate danger. Overall, I think the mood is being captured pretty well though.

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